10 Kasım 2013 Pazar


INTRODUCING MYSELF

I am Mehmet from Ankara,Turkey. I am 18 years old. I am studying English language teaching at one of best universities in Turkey , METU. I like dealing with languages , in fact ,even  learning a word in a day is my ambition , because it will be my business in near future.These are my personal features . I love being with my family and of course with my friends. Because of my being in dormitories for 5 years , mostly I want to be at home ,or live as if at home.Thanks to my friends supports , I don’t have difficulties so much. As everybody do , I like reading books especially historical and adventural ones.Listening joyful and sentimental musics are my other hobby.I am very ambitious , I’ve never given up to difficulties , particularly in exams because I like studying hard unlike people who don’t like it.Also i ile teaching  because it is my business’s requirement.I think that if somebody knows sometihng , she or he should teach it to the others , as the candles do.I like interacting with people , I easily meet them. Also I like finding solutions to problems.My other hobbies are playing tennis , basketball, watching football matches. My biggest dream is going to London ,or somewhere in Europe. Anyway , I really interested in etymology , because researching in vocabularies is very strange and joyful for me. I mad about Istanbul , just smelling the sea odour makes me better , i hope i will settle there in future.
acrostic


Years ago we were together
Once you seperated , I didn't want to live
Using all my belongings in vain.

And you were a liar , indeed
Regardless of your complaints
Everything could be perfect , if you were here.

Besides your eyes, your lips was wonderful
Expected feelings were so much that
About us everybody was respectful
U are the most beautiful
Till the end of our relationship
Immense emotions were disappeared
Fear about just breaking up
Use your body language as we did in the past
Levels of our love will again go up...

MEHMET GAZAN

6 Kasım 2013 Çarşamba

sentence variety (ex 9.10) Editing activity

1) Sandra is always healty , because she has a good diet.
2) The common cold make you feel sick , therefore ; stay at home in bed.
3) Although I've been living a healthy life , I ve been sick.
4)She exercises regularly , consequently, she is in very good shape.
5)With excellent nutrution , take generous supply of vitamins , do lots of exercises
6)Medicine is not important only when you are sick , so take care yourself.
7)The relationship between body and mind is very interesting.
8)Many doctors , including my doctor , charges very expensive rates.
9)The sun shining on my window , so I have plants in the window.
10)clinic.it also.
HOMEWORK ABOUT on FRAGMENTS (ex 5.26)

Run-on sentence have two or more independent sentences joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunction.
1)correction :...but she also eats eggs,unfortunately.
2)correction :......but now she eats a lot of beans and she also eats eggs.
3)it is not a run-on sentence
4)correction : However , that conception is changing now with the increase in vegetarian restaurants.
5)it is not a run-on sentence
6)correction :Now that she doesnt eat anymore , she feels better.
7)correction :it is not a run-on sentence.