Nowadays , as in the past , there is fierce debate over whether there are privileges for women or not. My opinion for this debate is women have really privileges in our country by our society. I have chosen this topic because our society is not interested in this topic very well. For me , especially in my life , I lived such discrimination against me. For example , in the meal queue , always women are first because of their gender. I think it is totally unfair. Of course they have different body system compared to mens' but it doesn't necessarily mean that they should have privileges. I dislike this behaviour. I like being fair to each gender equally. Also I think that this can create problems in society. However , there are opposing views to this topic. Their claim is women are both physically and emotionally different from men. They are respected much and they are precious. I agree this opinion partially. They are right in saying women are precious but again it doesn't mean to be privileged. These are examples : The mayor of Tekirdag announced that we made privileges to women while searching job. I think the rationale behind this application is very important. This is for hindering depriving of women from business. In addition , there was a speech '' Both men and women are equal '' . I strongly oppose this view when I think from the aspect of positive discrimination. Some people states that women should make a selection between a job and staying at home. I also disagree with them because it restricts their freedom. My suggestion for this problem is highly relevant with the government and society's general view. Of course we can't change their opinions totally , but there is always something to do and make our people conscious for discrimination is one of them...
Hi Mehmet,
YanıtlaSilYour reflection about privileges is good. Your grammatic structure is fine. However, I really don't understand your own opinion. You state some different points but your opinion can be more clear, I think. I mean I didn't understand your suggestion. On whole I liked the reflection.
thank you for your comment. As you said , I couldn't make a clear point . I will correct my mistakes anyway .
YanıtlaSil